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Where You At?

Tuesday, March 8th, 2011

There are authors who talk about setting as a character. I’m not one of those authors. :-/

As a reader, I skim or outright skip description especially of the setting. I have zero interest in reading it. Just ground me enough to know where I’m at and get me to the characters and the story. I can visualize my own airplane, my own living room, my own town without the author. :-) All I need to hear is gourmet kitchen and I have a mental image ready to go. Two words and the author has told me all I need or want to know.

Also, I get annoyed when the author’s vision of the scene conflicts with my own. :-) I don’t care that it’s her world. The more the author repeatedly goes in and describes the hero, heroine, the room, the world, the clothing, the more irritated I get if it disturbs my image. Well, I also get irritated because it bores the hell out of me. Charles Dickens, anyone? He was paid by the word and it shows with the unending description of inconsequential stuff.

As a writer, I have to make a conscious effort to go back and add description. I probably still don’t have enough for some readers, but believe me, what I’ve put in is more than I personally like or enjoy.

With the exception of the books I wrote which were part of series and which had the location dictated by the needs of the series, my stories could take place pretty much anywhere. Okay, so Jarved Nine and the Old City are kind of distinctive and those stories can’t take place in another location. That’s different. :-)

I do try to use the city to impact the story in some way. For example, snow in Minneapolis in March or having my hero hike in the mountains for the story that took place in Seattle, but setting isn’t a character for me.

That said, my hero and heroine do influence where the story happens.

I just mailed a proposal to my agent yesterday. The book takes place in South America and the h/h live in Los Angeles. I wanted them to live somewhere else because I’ve have so many LA set stories. The Blood Feud world is all LA and I have several other proposals that either take place there or have a hero and/or heroine from there. As I get that this h/h are from LA, too, I’m like enough already.

It doesn’t work that way, not for me. My characters are in charge, always. My heroine insisted on Los Angeles. As I researched her educational background, I discovered one of the really good graduate schools in her field is in that area. She came for the university and she stayed.

That said, the vast majority of the story takes place in South America and that’s new for me. And the setting actually will have impact on the characters and the plot. It already has with the heroine starting in the capitol city, which is in the mountains, and her ending up in a small village in the rainforest. Elevation and humidity, respectively.

But even so, I wouldn’t go as far as to say the setting is a character. I don’t understand that, not even when I read the authors who claim their setting is a character. Is there an atmosphere? Sure. Would I call it a character? No. I don’t even understand what those writers mean when they say it.

Which Version?

Sunday, March 6th, 2011

I hate it when a song I want to buy has multiple versions because then I have to figure out which version I want. If it’s just a remastered song or one copy is on the Best Of album then it’s not a big deal. I know what that is, but a lot of times it’s unclear.

Last week I wanted to buy a copy of Good To Be Me. I Googled the lyrics I remembered to get the name of the song and who sings it and then went to buy.

And found three versions. My choices were the regular song, the Deluxe version, and the River Road (River something) rendition. I figured out the Deluxe one had to do with the album and not the song, so I had it narrowed down to two options. I listened to a sample for each of them, but that didn’t help me because of the parts of the song in the sample. The lengths were different; one was 4:12 and the other was 4:01.

I decided to Google this and didn’t find anything helpful. I did find something interesting, though. The song had received “unsolicited” airplay and this bulletin board had people complaining that this song had gotten the play. There was another, more worthy country singer who hadn’t gotten unsolicited airplay like this. I was like, whoa. There are really people discussing things like this? And becoming angry on behalf of another singer? I had no idea that fans kept track of stuff like that.

But I digressed. Sorry. So none of my search results that I checked were helpful. I decided to go to my local radio station’s website, hoping they’d list which version of the song they played because that was the one I wanted. I had trouble getting parts of their site to load, including the listing that contained this song. I did find a video for it, played it, but it never said which version it was.

With nothing guiding me the direction I wanted to go, I punted and selected the longer version. I played it when it finished downloading and realized immediately that I’d bought the wrong one. Figures, doesn’t it?

I ended up going back and buying the other version. This is the one I wanted. I probably should have figured it out sooner since this mentioned it “featured Kid Rock,” but just because the other one didn’t say that, didn’t necessarily mean he wasn’t singing on it. I’ve run into that before. But in this case, it was accurate.

Mission accomplished, it just took two tries to reach the goal.

To Revise Or Not To Revise

Thursday, March 3rd, 2011

There’s a very interesting discussion happening on one of my author loops about how much revising to do to backlist titles where the rights have reverted to the author before putting them up in eBook format. And being writers, the topic split off into multiple directions. :-)

One conversational path was the technology issue. Some of these authors have contemporary romances or mysteries written in the 1980s and a cell phone changes a lot. There were authors who updated for the new tech and some authors who didn’t. They made mention in the front that the book was originally published in 1980-something and left it at that.

It was the second direction in which the conversation veered that has me thinking. Should an author revise her story to fix the writing?

A writer should be pushing herself with each project, learning more with each story and that means the writing should be improving. The difference between later books is smaller than on earlier stories because there’s more room for improvement, but there still should be growth.

This made me think of my first book, Ravyn’s Flight. I have a really strong memory of moaning to a group of online friends that I wished I could rewrite it because I was a much better writer now. This would have been around 2003/2004 because I know I’d finished The Power of Two and I learned a lot writing that book.

An author on the board, one who’s been published for many years, asked me a question: Did you do the best job you were capable of doing when you wrote the book?

Of course I did. I throw myself heart and soul into every story I write and I always strive to do the best work I’m capable of doing. I also tend to be a perfectionist, so I nitpick a lot at my work and always find more to pick at every step of the way.

So this author said, if you did the best you could, then you have to accept that your writing is better now and move on.

I took her advice and didn’t spend much time after that looking in the rearview mirror. That work was in print and I had no way to go back and fix it even if I wanted to. Only now I have the rights back to my first four books and I’m going to either resell the rights or put them up in eBook format or something. Which has me thinking hard–what do I fix?

In books 2-4, I don’t think I’d do much. I do know I’d tweak the language some, but while they’re a little wordier than I write now, I don’t feel any compelling need to rewrite them. And then there’s Ravyn’s Flight.

There are little things I’d do there, too, of course. There are things that happened between when I turned the book in and when I saw the galleys (test prints of the book where few changes are allowed) that I didn’t do and I didn’t like. For example, the two sentences that became one clunky, run-on sentence or the line I really liked that had a few words cut out of it, which left it a shadow of what I’d intended. But that’s little stuff.

If I was writing RF now, it would be different. Maybe drastically different. Is that a can of worms that I want to open?

Part of me would love to take that story apart and put it back together again. I am a better writer, a better storyteller now.

Part of me thinks I shouldn’t do more than the little tweaks no matter what. It isn’t just tightening up the writing, I’d probably end up changing plot stuff and that impacts story and character. I’m not sure I want to go there. I’ve heard from so many readers who’ve told me how much they love the story. What if the changes I make ruin the book for them? And do I really want to create a drastically different version of my first book?

At the moment, I’m leaning toward no. The book was the best I could write at the time that I worked on it. Maybe that needs to be enough.

Bye Bye Obligation

Tuesday, March 1st, 2011

I canceled Netflix.

I’d been debating this for a while because I would have the disks sitting for months before I played them. The envelope would be on top of my entertainment center, reminding me that I was paying every month for it to collect dust there.

I tried streaming movies, but my Wii is in the basement and I have one lawn chair down there and it’s not exactly comfortable to sit on. I bought a Roku player for upstairs, but it quit working in the middle of the first movie I streamed and their support was a joke. Also, it didn’t stream smoothly, but came in fits and starts which annoyed the hell out of me. This was a problem I didn’t have if I streamed on my laptop or with the Wii, so I’m blaming Roku and not my wifi or internet speed.

Last week, I blogged about streaming via HDMI from my laptop to the television, but this wasn’t seamless for me either. I only have one laptop that has an HDMI port–my newest one, the one I use all the time. It was a little inconvenient, although if I really wanted to watch a movie, I’d do it again.

But that’s what it came down to–how often do I really want to watch a movie?

April through October I watch baseball and over the winter, I just didn’t watch. And that envelope was on top of the entertainment center–a constant reminder.

And then Amazon announced free streaming for Prime members. That’s something I pay for and use and now I can stream? That was the final prod I needed. I canceled Netflix the next day and returned the current unwatched disk.

I never expected the feeling of utter relief. It was as if a big weight had been lifted off of me. I was free!

Something that was supposed to be fun–watching movies–had somehow become a burden. An obligation. Something that wore at me every day that I didn’t watch the disk or stream. I no longer have to watch a movie, now I can do it when I want to without the guilt. I feel so good now that I wish I had canceled earlier.


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