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Serendipity

Tuesday, September 13th, 2011

I love how things fall into place sometimes.

The latest example happened last week. I’ve had these heroes kind of hanging around since I wrote Eternal Nights. They’re the other members of Wyatt’s team. They come and go because their stories aren’t active projects, but since I wrote Troll’s story, they’ve hung around more than they did before that

One of these guys is Zach. If you read Troll’s story, you might remember him mentioning Z-Man. That’s Zach.

For the longest time, he didn’t gel for me. That normally means I don’t know something important about the character yet. If I wrote more J9 books, he’d be the third, so I haven’t worried much about it. And I’ve had characters that I was vague about before and it’s all worked out fine, so why stress? Then the pieces began to fall into position. The first came with Zach’s ethnicity. He’s part Japanese. I think he’s part Hawaiian, too. Learning this was key.

More information followed, but I remained stymied on his last name. Then I started hearing in my head: Zach Nishikawa.

I dismissed it at first, but it didn’t go away, so I Googled Japanese surnames. No Nishikawa listed on any of the sites I visited and I probably checked out half a dozen. Ergo, not a real name. My next assumption was that I was getting part of it wrong and wrote down a list of all the surnames that ended in -kawa. None felt right. And I still kept hearing Zach Nishikawa.

Sometimes I’m a little slow. I finally decided to Google Nishikawa instead of Japanese surnames and see if I got any hits that proved it was a real name. And guess what? It is. There are lots of Nishikawa hits–more than 3 billion.

It is a real name!

See what I mean about things falling into place? A skeptic will tell me that I probably heard the name sometime in the past and my subconscious dredged it up now. It’s possible. But I like to believe that Zach was talking to me and that serendipity was involved.

Troll’s World

Thursday, August 11th, 2011

When I was asked to write a time travel romance story for a Mammoth Books’ collection, I knew two things. One, I wanted my heroine to travel to the future and my Jarved Nine world. And two, I didn’t want to use the "magic necklace" method of time travel. Back when I read a lot of time travel romance, the heroine always traveled to the past via some object, hence the reference to the "magic necklace."

I’d done some research in the past into M Theory in physics and had picked up some really cool information and some of it came back to me. Particle accelerators theoretically can create small black holes and small wormholes, although these outcomes are unlikely, or if they do occur, not dangerous. At least according to what I read.

The idea of using real physics for the time travel element appealed to me. Maybe other writers have used wormholes–I don’t read much time travel any longer–but I take great pride on using the particle accelerator and a real issue that physicists have discussed to get my heroine to another time and place. :-)

As I wrote The Troll Bridge, I realized I had a full-length book. I had to cut out all the other stuff that was going on to fit it to the short word count requirement and condense the h/h’s relationship down to the bare essence. My writing buddies can tell you how many times I emailed them saying, "I wish I could write the whole book." In the version I wanted to write, there really are coalitions spies on J9. They learn Lia came from the past and want to use her in some plot (details are fuzzy now) and Troll has to protect her. There was so much cool stuff happening.

The story also unfolded over several weeks rather than a day or two, allowing time for the romance and the feelings to deepen enough for a complete happy ending rather than the optimistic ending I had to go with on the shorter length story. As much as I wanted to do a forever after wrap up, I didn’t think it was believable that two people who’d spent one day together would commit heart and soul to each other.

Plus, Lia is cautious by nature, she’s not going to fling herself into everything all at once. And Troll wouldn’t have survived in the army if he was a leap without looking kind of guy. There was just no way they’d let me wrap up the ending in a neat bow even if I could have managed it.

Some day, in my spare time, I’d like to rewrite this story and lengthen it to the way I saw it originally. I’d like to add all the coalition stuff and the teammates with their wives. Of course, I’d like to write the other team members, too, whose stories come before Troll and Lia. I need a lot more spare time than I have.

 

Jarved Nine Short Story

Tuesday, October 26th, 2010

The Troll Bridge is available for download on Kindle now! This is a short story that I wrote for The Mammoth Book of Time Travel Romance and it’s a story set largely on Jarved Nine. I had a lot of requests from fans of Ravyn’s Flight and Eternal Nights to make The Troll Bridge available on its own and I’m happy to finally be able to do this! It’s only in Kindle format right now, but I have plans to make it available on other ereaders as well. It just might take me a little while.

Amazon doesn’t have the description posted yet, so let me tell you a little bit about the story.

Troll Maglaya is the hero. He’s a member of Wyatt’s Special Ops team from ETERNAL NIGHTS. He wasn’t introduced by name then, but he stayed in my head and wouldn’t go away. I knew that somehow, some way I had to write his story, so it was hugely excited to get that opportunity. His heroine is Lia Stanton. She’s someone who’s played it safe her entire life, but when she’s sent to cover a test at a particle accelerator as part of her job in corporate communications, she finds herself flung down a wormhole. The next thing she knows, she’s on Jarved Nine forty years in the future. Alex (that would Lt. Col. Alexander “The Big Chill” Sullivan) thinks she’s a coalition spy and assigns Troll to guard her while the rest of the team searches for the coalition transport.

Aside from Alex, Damon also makes a brief (non-speaking) appearance. Sasha is in the book, too. She wasn’t introduced in ETERNAL NIGHTS either, but she’s the ex-wife that Flare was still carrying a torch for in EN. Because it’s a short story, things happen quickly between Lia and Troll and I didn’t get to unfold the suspense plot at all. If I had, it would have been a 100,000 word story and Mammoth Books didn’t want that length. :-)

As I mentioned on Sunday, The Troll Bridge takes place about 7 years after the epilogue of ETERNAL NIGHTS. In those intervening years, Flare, Gravedigger, and Z Man have gotten married. Someday, I hope to write those three men even if I can only do it as short stories because I just love all of Wyatt’s team to death.

Here’s the extremely awesome cover for the story:

The Troll bridge cover

Find The Troll Bridge on Amazon

Z-Man

Sunday, October 17th, 2010

Blogging about Flare got me thinking. His story would have been the first in a three-book series, and while I had a good handle on him and Sasha, his heroine, I didn’t have that same grasp on the other two stories. This got me thinking further about how in all the series ideas I’ve had, I know less about each book down the line.

For example, I know Flare and Sasha. I know their history, I know their growth arcs, I know them. The second book would have had Gravedigger (also from Eternal Nights and Nadia. I know some stuff about them, but not enough to write them. I don’t know either of them well and have no idea how either of them needs to change.

Which brings me to the third story. I knew five years ago that the hero was Z-Man (I know he’s mentioned in The Troll Bridge, but I’m sure about EN). I had a very vague sense of him, but nothing strong. I have no clue who his heroine is. At all. Because I was working on his story as part of the overview I put together for proposals, I tried to give him someone, but she changed a couple of times while I was working on it and was never set. None of those women stuck, I’m guessing because they weren’t the right ones.

So as I mentioned, Flare was talking. On Thursday, Z started, too. He’s revealing his background to me. At least a little bit. Five years ago, he told me he was a sniper and that you couldn’t do that job if you didn’t have your head screwed on straight. (Which was about the sum total of what he passed along way back when.) Now he’s telling me he grew up in northern California and that he’s part Hawaiian and part Japanese, as well as having European ancestors.

And that’s what’s kind of funny. Five years ago, I went looking for pictures of my three guys and was never happy with his. Every time I looked at Z’s image, I knew something was wrong, that it was close, but just not quite. It’s cool to know I was right and to know why.

Unfortunately, this isn’t the project I’m supposed to be working on right now. I hate to force Flare and Z back out of my brain, but I’m afraid that’s what I’ll need to do. Too many characters, too many stories, not enough time.

Flare Revisited

Friday, October 15th, 2010

I had an old character start talking to me out of the blue yesterday. I can guess what brought him back in so strongly–I’ve been thinking a lot about this world recently. Maybe it’s because I’m trying to put Troll’s story (The Troll Bridge) out in e-format, but whatever the reason, Flare is hanging around now.

Flare was a secondary character in Eternal Nights. He’s the hero’s (Wyatt Montgomery) second-in-command, the chief warrant officer of the Spec Ops team. I had a story arc for him, Gravedigger, and Z-Man all worked out after finishing EN, but I never finished the proposal.

To explain how thinking about Troll could bring Flare in, Wyatt’s Spec Ops team has Flare, Gravedigger, Z-Man, Troll and two other members who haven’t told me anything about themselves yet. The guys are good friends and Flare kind of feels like they’re all kid brothers and looks out for them.

When Wyatt was missing, he worried about him something fierce (the whole team did). He worries about Digger being involved with Nadia. Everyone on the team thinks she’s going to hurt him. (Nadia is Digger’s heroine, so no, she won’t, not ultimately.) He worries about Troll getting himself in hot water with all his women. (Troll’s story is written and happens 8 years after EN, so he hasn’t reformed yet in the timeframe Flare is showing me.)

If you think California surfer dude and visualize a blond man with sun-bleached hair, you’ll have a good idea what Flare looks like. Hey, Flare was a surfer dude before he joined the army. His full name is Francisco Cantore, but he picked up his nickname as a teenager and has gone by it rather than his real name since then. (Flare is a surfing term, and if I could remember the definition, I’d share it, but that was five years ago when I was writing Wyatt and Kendall’s story.)

His heroine is his ex-wife, Sasha. Some of the stuff that (I think) got cut on revisions for EN had Wyatt thinking about how Flare is still in love with his ex. Sasha is a civilian psychologist who specializes in helping military members and their families. She’s sent as a contract employee to J9 because the army is concerned about the mental health of the men and women stationed for extended periods of time light years away from Earth. (It’s a kinder, gentler kind of military in my future world. ;-)

I’m torn right now. I really don’t have time to work with Flare, not with other projects I’m either writing or want to write, but on the other hand, I love him. I’ve loved him since I met him in EN. He’s been quiet today, so maybe yesterday was just one of those things. We’ll see.

Done!

Monday, June 1st, 2009


Today, I made the final polish on the time travel short story and sent if off to the editor. This story is set on Jarved Nine (the same world as Ravyn’s Flight and Eternal Nights) and the hero is Troll Maglaya, he’s a member of Wyatt’s team and takes place seven years after EN.

I might have said this before, but I love Troll and I’m so glad I was able to write about him. The really interesting thing is that I had no idea what his story was, only that he had one and that it happened after all the rest of his teammates were married. The time travel aspect gave me a way (I felt) to leap frog past the other romances. As it stands, readers will meet Sasha who is Flare’s heroine and will also see Alex Sullivan (aka The Big Chill) and Damon Brody has a non-speaking cameo appearance. If you read the story (and if it stays in after edits), you’ll find out that he and Ravyn had more children after Cam.

My one regret is that I didn’t get to do a full-length story, but if I did, I know what it is now. It’s almost exactly what was laid out in the short story, only the events would take place over more time and I’d get the suspense/action in there. I was forced to skip both those things to get the story finished within the word count guidelines.

Anyway, it’s good to be done and now it’s back to the WIP. It feels like forever since I worked on that!

A Short Story Wants to Grow Up and Be a Novel

Tuesday, May 19th, 2009

When I wrote Blood Feud for The Mammoth Book of Vampire Romance 2, I just had enough information to tell Isobel and Seere’s story, and while I could see the potential for this world, I didn’t really feel any driving desire to write more for this couple or any other couple. Things are different for the short story I’m writing for The Mammoth Book of Time Travel Romance.

The biggest thing is that I keep getting information on how to make Lia and Troll’s story a full-length novel and it’s hard for me to shorthand it. I feel as if I’m skipping stuff I’d really like to take time to explore. I can’t. I only have 6,500 to 12,000 words and I just can’t do it. I also had to jettison the suspense/action part of the story because there isn’t enough space, and while I could add a little in, it would be at the end which would make it feel tacked on. I reluctantly released that string.

I think my problem stems from the fact that Lia and Troll are part of my Jarved Nine world (Ravyn’s Flight, Eternal Nights) and I’ve been in love with Troll since I met him. Troll, BTW, is a member of Wyatt’s team from EN. He’s a reformed player and just sexy as all get out. I don’t know if I can do him justice in the length and I sure can’t convey the sincerity of his conversation.

Another issue is that Troll and Lia just met in this story. With Blood Feud, my hero and heroine had a past together and it was merely a matter of rekindling their feelings. Much easier than establishing a relationship between a h/h who didn’t hook up until 10 pages into a story that will be less than 50 pages. If I was doing a full-length story, I’d have it take place over a few weeks, I’d give them time to fall in love and then Lia’s decision to stay in the future would make sense. This is much more difficult to convey in a short where the h/h have been together the grand total of maybe ten hours. Love is out and I have to go for staying to see where the relationship might lead and the potential for a happy ending down the road.

And then there’s the other characters from the first two J9 books. Several of them have put in an appearance and I want to spend more time with them, too. That’s not all. Troll and Lia’s story takes place after Flare’s story, and Gravedigger’s, and Z Man’s and their heroines are there as well.

Despite all this, I’m somehow managing to get where I need to go with the short story. It’s just hard to remember the “short” part sometimes.


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