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Doppleganger?

Thursday, January 12th, 2012

A couple of weeks ago there was an interesting discussion on one of my writer loops about doing a Google search before finalizing a pen name. The topic came up because a self-published author is using the name of a multi-published with New York author and another small press author was using a name that was nearly identical to another author’s romance pseudonym.

The subject than turned to Googling character names. Sometimes I do this, sometimes I don’t.

I pretty much have zero leeway on the first names, especially of my hero and heroine. It doesn’t matter to them if I don’t like the name or not, they tell me who they are and that’s that. I’ve learned to deal with this, and in all honesty, I like it. The one time I was left to choose a name was torturous. Sometimes I still complain about not being the driver’s seat, but as soon as I remember how miserable I was when I did have control, I shut up and say never mind.

Surnames, though, I do have some say in. Not always and sometimes not much, but the characters are rarely intractable on this score. And when the last names come too easily, I tend to Google. Sometimes it turns out there is a real person with that name. There was one time my hero’s name was identical to someone who was arrested for a high profile crime. I can’t help but think that I’d heard that man’s name on the news at some point, and when my hero gave me his first name, my subconscious dredged out the felon’s name. Needless to say, the hero had his surname changed.

Sometimes the name is completely set and I can’t change it no matter what Google turns up. Like Mika Noguchi from Through a Crimson Veil. In the book, Mika makes a joke when Conor searches her name and discovers that Mika Noguchi is an Asian woman’s wrestling champ. Why does she do this? Because there really is a Mika Noguchi who’s a woman wrestler. This actually led to a running joke through the story.

Checking out a character’s name isn’t a bad thing, but I doubt there’s any name out there that no one in the world has unless it’s something totally made-up and bizarre, and even then, who knows? Where does the line get drawn? No, I wouldn’t let a character named Brad Pitt loose in a book, but Mika Noguchi? I thought that was okay since there can’t be that many of my readers who follow Asian woman’s wrestling. In the end, I think it has to come down to a writer’s best judgment.

 

Ooh, Baby, Baby, Baby, Baby

Thursday, November 17th, 2011

My original thought about a blog topic was something along the lines of how much I hate it when the hero calls the heroine baby, but then I reconsidered that. It would just be my luck to riff on that for an entire post and wake up tomorrow with a hero who uses it. It was bad enough that Deke called Ryne babe during In the Midnight Hour At least that started as a way to rile her, but still I decided I’m in no position to blog about endearments.

As I thought about it some more, I realized that the two books I picked up recently that had baby used as the endearment of choice had a bigger problem. The authors of both stories had the heroes calling their heroines that in every single paragraph of dialogue–or darn close to it.

As a reader, nothing irritates me more than characters who use each other’s names (or nicknames/endearments/etc) every time they open their mouths. Real people do not talk that way. Not ever. I challenge any writer who’s tempted to use the character’s name in dialogue to listen to others. Even in groups of five or six, it’s rare to hear someone’s name and it’s pretty much nonexistent when only two people are talking to each other. Like the hero and heroine for example.

It’s not just novice writers either. I’ve seen authors who’ve been writing for twenty years do it, too. Because I’m so aware of this, not only do I rarely use names in dialogue, I also do a search for both the hero’s and heroine’s names (and endearments) in my manuscript, and if I see it between a couple of quotation marks, I think about whether I really need it. Nine times out of ten, I delete it.

I pretty much never say anyone has to do anything as a writer because I was nearly driven from writing all together by plotters who insisted I had to use 3 x 5 cards and formulate everything out ahead of time. But this isn’t really messing with anyone’s process (I don’t think) to recommend taking out the majority of name use within dialogue.

Seriously, this is not how people talk:

 

"Baby, I want you; you’re so beautiful."

"But Biff, it’s too soon."

"Don’t tell me that, baby, I need you."

"I don’t know, Biff, we just met ten minutes ago."

"Come on, baby, help me out here."

"Oh, Biff."

 

You get the drift right? And sadly this example is not an exaggeration. I picked up two books in the last week that did this exact thing.

Have you ever heard anyone in real life talk this way? Now do a search in your Work In Progress. How many times have you used your characters names in dialogue? Delete most of them. Your readers will thank you.

 

Playing the Name Game–Again

Tuesday, January 18th, 2011

In the past week or so, I’ve seen two authors on Twitter talk about their trouble choosing names for their heroes and heroines that they haven’t used before. Both times it made me stop short and go, Whoa! That’s right. Some authors get to pick names.

I don’t. At least not usually and I don’t have a problem with this. I’ve had one character a few years ago who let me name her. The experience was awful. I spent weeks going through names, trying different ones out, eliminating one, trying again. After that experience, I stopped complaining about this. Oh, every now and then I still feel a small pang that I can’t use some super cool name I’ve seen, but then I remember the Chaya incident and always tack on, But I’m okay with it. Just in case. I never want to go through that again.

Right now, as I work on my synopsis for one proposal, I’m in Pre-Book for another story. The heroine dragged her feet a little on her name, I got one that was semi-close (okay, it ended in the same letter as the name she finally claimed), and then got her real name. I probably should put real in quotation marks since she’s not sure if it really is her name or a nickname. It’s a long story. :-) Bottom line–I had her name in a week with very little effort on my part. I like this.

The hero, however, is proving to be much bigger trouble. For a while, we played around with H names. Finally, I got the right H, but it turns out it’s his surname. Okay, I can deal with this and it doesn’t really matter which name comes first, right?

His given name didn’t come quickly. It starts with an R, he tells me. I run through baby name sites, I flip through baby name books, but he refused to claim any name that started with an R. I tried one that I thought might maybe work. Yes, I do know better, but I’d spent so much time and I just wanted a name. It didn’t survive more than a couple of hours before I gave up.

With nothing coming, I started wondering if what I thought was his surname was really his first name. He seemed open to this. I found a new surname and told a writing buddy, this is my hero. It wasn’t.

Last Friday, I think he finally gave me his name. At least this name has stuck for four days, so I’m hopeful. I’m not sure why the hesitation since it’s a normal, common name. My theory is that it’s because I’m working with a different hero and heroine who have my focus right now and this makes it harder for me to connect with other characters.

And despite all this time and effort on my part? Yeah, I’d still rather have the characters pick their own names. It really is easier.

The Name Game

Thursday, April 8th, 2010

I blogged earlier this week about all the characters I have in my head right now. Outrageous numbers, even for me, and there have been times in the past that I thought I was overloaded. That’s nothing compared to now. The couple that’s talking the most, though, hadn’t shared their names with me. (Like I mentioned, I don’t get to chose my characters names, they tell me who they are.)

This has changed since I wrote the blog. The hero went first. Only I didn’t know if his name was first, last or a nickname. Yesterday, I found out it’s his first name because he finally shared his surname. :-) Awesome. Only now, it started bugging me that I didn’t know the heroine’s name.

I had a mission–get her to share her name.

She gave me hints. Her parents are academics, they didn’t pick anything trendy or created. Because both her parents are in the same field of study, I decided to look for famous people within that area of expertise. None of these names were right. I tried to push Tatiana because a woman with that name did pioneering work in the same area of the world her parents have an interest in, but the heroine would have no part of it. Sigh. Seriously, I get little to no cooperation and then they complain when I torture them? Just returning the favor, pals.

I tried a few other paths in her parents’ area, but nothing panned out. I turned to nameberry.com next. This site is from the same people who put together the best baby name book (read that as CHARACTER name book) ever, Beyond Jennifer and Jason. (My characters choose their names, but they might say, “My name starts with an R” and then make me look through baby name book after baby name book until I see their name. Then I’ll hear, “That’s me.” I like it better when I just hear, “Mika.” It saves me a lot of work.) Anyway, one of the features of the Nameberry site is that they have lists. I started pulling them up, looking for the one my heroine would say was hers.

I tried royal names, classic names, headed to Harvard names. Nada. I must have gone through two dozen lists before I saw Zoe. Hmm. Not her name, she made that clear, but something was close. I went to another favorite site, Behind the Name, and pulled up all the female Z names. I got her!

After all the work she put me through, it was actually surprising how fast she shared her last name. I got that without any prompting at all. I liked that a lot. If only the whole process had been that easy.

The Voices, They’re Multiplying!

Monday, April 5th, 2010

I’ve always had a lot of ideas rolling in–except when I was dealing with burnout–but in the past, most of the ideas were unusable for a full story. They were fine for daydreaming, but I knew they couldn’t stand beneath the weight of writing them. Right now, though, the ideas are rolling in fast and furious and they are all strong enough to be stories.

Not just one book stories either. Series of books. A couple are three, one is four, and another five. And still ideas keep coming.

It’s very loud and crowded in my head right now. I didn’t realize just how bad it was until this weekend when I went looking for pictures of one of my more recent couples. (Notice I didn’t say the most recent. That’s because another idea rolled right in after this one.) The hero, BTW, was a total PITA. Every picture was wrong. The guy was too old, too soft looking, his hair was too long, too short, too light, too dark, too curly, etc. To the point where I was ready to scream.

In comparison, the heroine was simple. She found herself fairly quickly. I’ve decided to torture him worse than her because of this.

Anyway, as I posted the new couple up on the website, I counted how many pairs of h/h I have. Thirteen. That’s 26 people. That’s not counting my latest couple.

I have no name for her at all. My characters, for newcomers to the blog, tell me their names. I never get to pick, not like some authors do. I used to complain about this, but I’ve decided I love it even if I’m not crazy about some of the names I get stuck with. If you’ve read my story in The Mammoth Book of Time Travel Romance you’ll see that Flare is married to Sasha. Sasha. Sigh. I never thought I’d have a character with that name, but there you go.

Anyway, I digressed. Heroine in latest, newest of the new shiny ideas has shared no name with me yet. Her hero has given me part of his name. I don’t know if it’s first name, his last name, or a nickname. That hasn’t been passed along to me yet. Until I have their full names, I can’t go looking for pictures.

So 14 couples in my head. Plus the fact that Kel and Farran from In the Darkest Night have been hanging around. And Logan and Shona, and Creed and Maia, and Ryne and Deke, not to mention assorted other characters from my Light Warrior series. My head is hurting just trying of figure out how many people are yapping at me right now.

Freeze Frame!

Monday, June 8th, 2009

Before I get started, I’d like to remind everyone that Carolyn Jewel is giving away a copy of My Wicked Enemy to a lucky commenter on her post. I mirror this blog in four different places and Carolyn has generously offered to give away a second copy–one on MySpace and one on Blogger, so if you haven’t commented yet, what are you waiting for? The drawing will take place June 10th.

Now on to my Sunday night post:

I spent most of Saturday on two things–making notes on the world I built in my short story, Blood Feud and looking for pictures of two sets of heroes and heroines.

The notes on Blood Feud were necessary because I have ideas for two more stories set in that same world, but I couldn’t remember all the details that I’d put in the short story. The thing that surprised me was how much I’d forgotten. Or maybe it shouldn’t surprise me since it was due on the same day that my book had to be turned in to Tor and I was really thundering on the pages. I ended up with four pages of notes.

On Friday, the characters in these two stories finally gave me their names, and that means it’s getting close to time to work on them.

Armed with notes and my characters names, I attempted to put together a short synopsis. Yeah, I know, but I can do short if I really have to. Sometimes. :-) But I kept running into a problem. While I knew general information about the characters and kind of had a bead on their attitudes, I didn’t feel like I had a good grip on them and that tripped me up on the synopsis. That meant it was time to go hunting for character pictures.

Ah, yes, either one of my favorite things to do or one of my least favorite depending on how long it takes to find the right images. For one couple, I already had their pictures on my hard drive and they were actually together in the shots. Yea!

Immediately, I started getting information that I didn’t have before, especially about the heroine. That’s why I love having the pictures. I know when I’ve found the right one and it just unleashes a torrent of information.

Couple two, however, wasn’t going to prove this easy. I thought the hero would be easiest to locate because I had a good idea of his personality and I believed that I had a good idea of what he looked like. It was his heroine that I found first. She was a surprise. Younger-looking than I expected (keep in mind she’s supernatural so while she looks young, she isn’t) and…moodier. Very much at home in the night, which I knew, but the picture that best represented her really underscored this.

As difficult and time consuming as it had been to find her picture, her hero’s was even more difficult to locate. I thought I knew what he looked like. I was wrong. I didn’t figure it out until I kept circling back to two men–both who had longish blondish hair.

I thought he had dark hair. I thought it was worn conservatively short. I thought he looked older than about 23, even though I knew he was a paranormal dude, too. Once I finally was able to give up what I thought I knew and go with the guy that felt the most right, things clicked for me with him, too. Surfer dude. Who’d have thought? Obviously, not me. :-)

And this took all day. Literally. Today, I worked on my WIP (Work In Progress) instead of either of these stories, but I don’t look at it as wasted time. Now, with these images clear in my head, I’ll have more to mull over and mulling is always productive.

My Vampire Chick

Monday, January 19th, 2009

I mentioned that I was asked to participate in The Mammoth Book of Vampire Romance 2 and I think I said that my heroine was talking to me. She imparted a lot of information, most it helpful, but would not tell me her name. I know she’s switched names a lot over the centuries, but the hero knows her real name and he calls her that name. Only I don’t know it.

Squeezing her got me nowhere. In fact, she stopped talking. But it was getting ridiculous, you know? I can’t move forward without a name. To make it even more fun, it needs to be a name that was used back when she was born, and since I don’t write historical and have no intention of ever doing so, I don’t have resources for historical names. I was toying with using Elizabeth. I wasn’t completely certain, but I thought it had been around long enough, but that didn’t feel exactly right.

Close, but not exactly.

Tonight, I made it my mission to figure out what the heck my heroine’s name is. I found a site that has links to all kinds of names from medieval as well as other historical eras and I started clicking. It didn’t take too long before I found Isabella. Hmm. Was Isabella really around back then? I mean, the site I found was for creating characters in a Role Playing Game and I was a little leery, so I visited my favorite name site: Behind the Name.

They listed Isabella as a form of Isabel and when I clicked over to Isabel (which seemed oh, so right for my heroine), I discovered that Isabel is a form of Elizabeth and that it became popular in England in the 13th century. Bingo!

I knew Elizabeth was almost right, but I had no idea why. Now I do. How cool is this?

Throwaway Names

Friday, January 11th, 2008

One of my least favorite things to do is name the minor characters. I’m not talking about secondary characters, I mean the ones that I don’t think will make much of a ripple in the story or that I’ll ever want to write about, but are on the stage long enough to be named and not just referred to as “the valet” or whatever. My two problems are 1) I want it to be a name that I’m unlikely to be using as a hero or heroine in the future. The near future at any rate. And 2) I’ve been bit before by thinking someone was a walk-through character only to have them tell me later that they had a story.

So yesterday I’m trying to come up with a name for a character I don’t think will make a second appearance, but at this point, I can’t be sure. I also don’t want to repeat names that are close to any of the characters in my Light Warriors series. I had a great name for this character–until I realized how close it was to Anise (the villain in Midnight Hour) and I thought it might get confusing.

Sometimes it’s not so bad. The inside joke in Eternal Nights is that it’s my baseball book. :-) Many of the walk-through characters (mostly bad guys) all have the names of major league players. Hey, desperate measures, right? And I had the games on anyway for the playoffs.

The character name that bit me, though, was also from EN. I needed a throwaway name for Wyatt’s chief warrant officer and I went with Cantore (hey, it was hurricane season when I was writing that part of the book). Only it turns out that Flare has a story. I haven’t written it yet, and TBH, there are other stories calling louder right now, but if I do write it, I’m stuck with Cantore. At least I didn’t give him a first name for him in that book.

I think I finally came up with something for the character in the Work In Progress (WIP), but what if she ends up being a bigger player than I thought? Do I really want to be stuck with this name that I don’t like? And so the dilemma rages on.

I’m curious. How do you other writers handle the throwaway name thing? The football playoffs aren’t going to help me with the first name for a woman. :-)

Yes, It’s Characters–Again

Thursday, November 15th, 2007

I’m completely moved into my new cube at work! Yea! It’s already so much nicer than where I was sitting before, it’s like a paradise. Well, okay, as close to paradise as I can get at the Evil Day Job (EDJ). The only drawback is it’s going to be sneaking on the internet. :-( I have a little less privacy where I’m at now.

My issues with my heroine continue. It’s so weird because she is talking to me. I know what kind of vehicle she drives, I know where she works, I know her family situation, I’ve even found a picture of what she looks like. In fact, she’s been more forthcoming about details than a lot of my characters have been. Except for one critical piece of information–her name. Yep, the saga goes on. And on and on. Sigh.

I guess the argument could be made that with everything I know about her and with the fact that I have a picture, that I should know enough to start writing scenes from her point of view. After all, what’s in a name? For me, I guess, quite a lot. It provides nuances into the character, just like the picture does and I think those shades are important.

I’ve had a few people emailing me name suggestions and I’ve liked a few of them so I’m going to try them out in my head and see how it goes. At this point, I’m getting pretty desperate. The prologue is written, I’ve tinkered with it, now it is time to move forward.

I’m beginning to feel like an echo, constantly talking about this, but this is my writing news right now. I’ve never, ever been in this situation before. I’ve always had characters volunteering their names. I’ve toyed with the idea that maybe it isn’t time to write this book, but I think it is–both characters are talking, both of them are showing me future scenes and that doesn’t happen if it’s not the right time.

And the beat goes on…..

Moving Day

Wednesday, November 14th, 2007

Yesterday at the Evil Day Job (EDJ), my phone was moved to a new cube. Yes, it’s real. I’m really getting a cube as far away from the coworker from hell as I can get and still be in my department! Yea! It’s not foolproof because he’s so loud and because he comes over to this area I’m in to chit chat, but it’s better than being at ground zero. I’m hugely happy!

Of course, while my phone has been moved, my computer hasn’t, and since most of my job is on the computer, I’ll still have to spend time at my old cube until that comes over, too. So while I’m not completely free yet, I’m almost delirious with joy and two big pluses–I’m much closer to the printer and to the restrooms. :-)

In other news, for a little while last night I thought I had my heroine’s name. I even emailed it to a writing buddy, all excited about it. Then as I laid in bed and tried to daydream the scene in her point of view, I realized it wasn’t her name after all. Talk about agony. To go from elation to resignation in one fell swoop was not fun. Ah, well, the search goes on.


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